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Coffin Liner

10:14 Oct 30 2008
Times Read: 737


You kissed the razorblade

Right before you drove it through my chest

The closest anything from your lips

Has ever been to my heart

Words, kisses, its all the same

None of it ever meant a damn thing

I know that now, as you spill this blood from my veins

All these years, you've been slowly driving my life force away

I've suffered your wrath, and the culmination is now

The knife reaches my soul, and carves it right out



You've taken my life now, and I won't ever get it back

Its been years now, but I just realized

I've been under attack

Your words and your looks, always stinging me deep

My dignity is yours

Never was my own to keep

Not once you were in my life

Always fighting to bring me down

I never managed to realize how much better off I'd be

With you, never around

But its too late now, as you've destroyed my heart tonight

And I can't figure out what to do

As I lie there, without a sound

I reach out from my sides and open my eyes...

Only to realize I'm underground

Six feet deep, is where you've left me

And in this box is where I'll stay

Forever, with no one around...



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Aiyana
Aiyana
14:41 Oct 30 2008

It seems really sad, but I love it ^-^ Just like I love everything you write





erin88
erin88
14:52 Oct 30 2008

(commenting like you ask :P)



I know who this is "sorta" about.. Lady is a bitch lol.

You need to sit down one day and let it alllll out :)





TaintedAngel14
TaintedAngel14
00:50 Oct 31 2008

SUPER!, alittle depressing, but i enjoyed it. it has alor of rhythem to it.





Firedrake
Firedrake
06:27 Oct 31 2008

the storyline sounds familiar.....





Kryptick
Kryptick
03:12 Jul 01 2009

This is really good. The first section is flawless, beautiful, and comes across crystal clear.

The second section, the rhyme scheme is a little choppy to be read smoothly after reading the first section, but it's still really good.

The concept is heartbreaking, but interesting and heartfelt. Overall, very good.





 

Dead Heir

02:13 Oct 29 2008
Times Read: 749




NOTE: I know this, and the others I am going to post today, are very different than what I normally write...and they might not totally make sense, but...I hope you enjoy





I am the heir to nothing

I am much too dead to care

I've learned my lessons thoroughly

I just can't live to share

So as you inherit yours

I hope, better than me, you'll fair

For I am the one, the only

Dead Heir



I am the heir to nothing

As I've suffered so much

But if you'd like to sit with me

I've a story, whats your rush?

I'll keep it short and sweet

I've fought through life

Around some of the worst people

You would never wish to meet

I had so much to inherit

From my own trials and tribulations

But I was taken too far

And overcome by my very own scars

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TaintedAngel14
TaintedAngel14
02:46 Oct 29 2008

is weird, but i like it out of all your songs...





 

(sur)Render The Bullets

02:10 Oct 29 2008
Times Read: 750




NOTE: I know this, and the others I am going to post today, are very different than what I normally write...and they might not totally make sense, but...I hope you enjoy







The fifth of November, the fourth of July

The third world war, the second from the sky

The first in so long, the last as we're gone



I Render The Bullets in this form

Ammunition from the soul

Surrender your bullets, or risk annihilation

Of this world, as a whole



Five main parties, four years in a term

Three different answers, to the same damn question

One man will serve, though none are deserving



I Render The Bullets in words

A true form of fighting, if there ever was

Surrender your bullets, these men don't deserve

To go to their death for an unknown cause



Five have cried, four have died

Three seconds, to the end of life

For one, but this fate should belong to none



I Render The Bullets with anger

Spewn forth into a microphone

Surrender your bullets

And let everyone come home...

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Kryptick
Kryptick
03:23 Jul 01 2009

This is really strange for you but I really like it. As I told you, I love the intricacy of the form, and the structure. I also like the consistency throughout each stanza.



Favorite parts:

"Five main parties, four years in a term

Three different answers, to the same damn question

One man will serve, though none are deserving"



"I Render The Bullets with anger

Spewn forth into a microphone

Surrender your bullets

And let everyone come home..."



also, the title is pretty witty.





 

Unsettling Destruction

02:05 Oct 29 2008
Times Read: 753




NOTE: I know this, and the others I am going to post today, are very different than what I normally write...and they might not totally make sense, but...I hope you enjoy







People scatter and blood spatters

As bullets rip through fate and flesh

Screams fade out to silence

The guns move on, through destiny and mangled bodies

Half-hearted groans come from the lifeless

As soldiers poke and prod through the devastation

Stray shots ring out to end the suffering of some

These men show no shame in what they've done

Innocent lives were lost on this night

All in the name of finding a man, nowhere in sight

The helpless brought down unceremoniously

Mistaken, in the attempted murder of a man they've never seen

Soldiers leave the bodies strewn along the streets

Sensing in themselves, a feeling of defeat

An ominous sense of lurking sorrow

They'll hunt the man in another village tomorrow...





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Kryptick
Kryptick
03:14 Jul 01 2009

Things that stick out to me:

fate and flesh

mangled bodies

half-hearted groans



This is really deep and intriguing. Filled with horrific, bloodsoaked imagery. I love the descriptions you used, it makes it seem very real...and I like the fact that it doesn't end as strongly as most of the rest of your stuff. It leads the reader to realize that the tragedy, the suffering will never end, which lends a huge amount of knowledge that overshadows and taints everything else as you look back on this piece.






 

Adoringly In Your Arms, Now & Always

07:30 Oct 22 2008
Times Read: 770


You've brought me this feeling again...

A feeling I haven't felt in so long...



Hold me tight

As I speak your name

From no one's lips

Would "I Love You"

Sound the same

I'll forever be

Adoringly In Your Arms, Now & Always



And I know that you care

When I feel your fingers in my hair

I know just what love is

When I feel your kiss

And I know why

When I look into your eyes

I'll hold you close

So you'll always know

How much I need you



No words are needed

You speak enough with your eyes

I'll feel you in my heart

For the rest of my life

My world is so much better

When you are around

No words are needed

Not even a sound



Hold me tight

As I speak your name

From no one's lips

Would "I Love You"

Sound the same

I'll forever be

Adoringly In Your Arms, Now & Always



I've fallen for you...

Like the sun on an everlasting eve...

I can feel you in my heart...

And I know you'll never leave...


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This Memory Of You

11:24 Oct 17 2008
Times Read: 781


I don't think I'll shake this

This memory of you

How did you awaken this

This memory of you

I thought it was gone

Swallowed down by my soul

But here I am

Stuck again, in this hole



I thought I had moved on

I guess I was wrong

I thought I had regained

What was lost for so long

I thought I had survived this

I thought this pain was gone

Now I'm back on the road, searching

For a place where I belong



I don't think I'll shake this

This memory of you

How did you awaken

This memory of you

I wish I could erase

This memory of you

But its impossible to forget

The memory

Of a love once so true...


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Aiyana
Aiyana
14:46 Oct 30 2008

aww this is sad too...





Firedrake
Firedrake
10:22 Nov 02 2008

this reminds me of one i used to know.......





 

The Breaking Of A Heart

21:24 Oct 15 2008
Times Read: 791


If you stray too far

I won't be visible when you turn back

I'll be too far to catch you when you fall

I don't wanna lose you, but you're pushing away

Falling away

And I feel you slipping

More and more, each day



As each day turns to night

I still wonder if you're alright

I miss you each and every time

You've been gone so damn long

And still, I'm not fine

You're always on my mind



You've strayed too far

I only see you in my head

And between these picture frames

I feel like I've lost you, you've pushed away

Fallen away

I'm feeling nothing now

Less and less, each day



As each day passes

Life feels more and more like a fight

I know I've lost you, I feel dead inside

I miss you constantly

You've been gone so damn long

But still, I won't be fine

Never be fine

You'll always haunt my mind


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erin88
erin88
11:14 Oct 17 2008

(offering my opinion like you asked :P)



You're really good, Stephen :)

Can tell all these lyrics mean something to you and come from your heart



A+





Aiyana
Aiyana
14:47 Oct 30 2008

So is this one... you write lotsa sad things, but they're still great.





DefiantxXxAngel
DefiantxXxAngel
12:05 Jan 10 2009

Perfect




 

Imprisoned In Sin

20:24 Oct 06 2008
Times Read: 818




I've been judged for the man I could've been

Not for the man I am

I sweat out my innocence

As I'm Imprisoned In Sin

My wounds are just a staging point

For my torture to begin



Imprisoned in sin

Guilty until proven otherwise

Judgement passed, as such

In a perfect world

I'd be the perfect one

Among imperfect men

In this existing world

Falling short of any conception

Of the word

So instead

I'm imprisoned in sin



Might this punishment

Spell the end

Will my innocence

Be drained completely

From within

I feel the pain

Of a mind-wrenching device

Strapped directly to my soul

Twisting, contorting

All I love, all I know

I've been...

Imprisoned in sin

I've been...



Judged for the man I could've been

Not for the man I am

I sweat out my innocence

As I'm Imprisoned In Sin

My wounds are just a staging point

For my torture to begin

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A Good Reason To Love, Is A Great Reason To Live

17:30 Oct 06 2008
Times Read: 820


Where am I?

Aside from, by your side

What am I?

Aside from, your love

Who am I?

Aside from, your sweetheart

When am I?

Aside from, in our moment

Why am I?

Does anything else even matter?



You are my world

And love is our galaxy

Through time and through space

Reaching out to the furthest reaches

Nothing but love in our lives

No concerns with our lows

When we are so often at our highs

Strip away the conventional

Leave out the deceit and the lies

We're in effect when together

The thought of you

Constantly controls my mind

And the thought of us

Brings reason to my life



Where are you?

Aside from, in my light

What are you?

Aside from, my life

Who are you?

Aside from, my angel

When are you?

Aside from, forever and always

Why are you?

Nothing else even matters


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DefiantxXxAngel
DefiantxXxAngel
12:09 Jan 10 2009

Awww




 

A War Without Reason

20:03 Oct 05 2008
Times Read: 831


A war with no reason

Is a war we cannot win



Enough!



Its time to bring them home

So their families aren't alone

Alone, on the homefront

The time has come

Let them come back home



A war with no reason

Is a war we cannot win

A war we cannot win

Is a war that will not end

This war was wrong to begin with



Enough!



We cannot allow this

Any longer

This futile war

Isn't making our nation

Any stronger

And I, for one

Am done

We've had enough



A war without reason...

A war without reason...

That was wrong from the beginning

A war without reason

Is a war that will never end



Enough!



Its time to bring them home

So their families aren't alone

Alone, on the homefront

The time has come

Let them come back home



A war without reason

Is a war we cannot win

A war we cannot win

Is a war that will not end



A war...

Is a reason...

For an uprising...

To begin


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